id	summary	reporter	owner	description	type	status	priority	milestone	component	version	resolution	keywords	cc
15	"Nit Picking:  minor corrections will increase clarity of ""using-foolscap.html"""	arch_o_median	None	"Section:
Clients vs Servers, Names and Capabilities

 Typo:
  ""...contact the servre.""  should be ""...contact the server.""  

Section:
Invoking Methods, Method Arguments

 Typos:
 ""...(making you you don't pass anything over..."" should be ""...(making sure you don't pass anything over ...""

 ""The caller's Deferred with fire with..."" should be ""The caller's Deferred will fire with...""

Section:
Tokens

 Novice's Misinterpretation:
  ""The body (if present) has a length dictated by the magnitude of the header.""

  Initially I thought perhaps the length (up to 64 bits) of the header could be used to infer the length of the body...   but I think what is meant is that the header (in part) explicitly specifies the length of the body.  If this is what was meant then I became confused by the use of the word ""magnitude"" here. Perhaps simply excising ""the magnitude of"" would make the meaning clearer?  Or perhaps I still misunderstand.

Section:
 Constraints

 Typo:
  ""Banana protocol has single"" should be ""Banana protocol has a single""

Section:
  RemoteInterfaces

 Typo:
  ""addtional"" should be ""additional""  "	defect	closed	trivial	0.1.7	documentation	0.1.5	fixed